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Sara Gran in Dope

12/24/2017

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In Dope, Sara Gran establishes the tone and creates tension in the first three sentences: ​
"Josephine."

Maude said my name flatly, like I was dead or she wanted me to be. I sat across from her at a booth in the back of the bar, where the daylight never reached and the smell of stale beer and cigarettes never cleared.  ​
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